The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.
the bar charts compare the
number
of UK graduates
and postgraduates
who chose other options over a full-time career after finishing college in 2008.
overall
, those who continued their education had the highest significant amount in both groups, whereas
the voluntary job had the least popularity. Moreover
, the number
of graduates
was significantly higher than the postgraduates
.
according to
graduates
, the majority of educators who continued their studies were around 30.000. followed by, the number
of students who chose part-time work stood at second 17.735, while
that for unemployment was lower by a narrow margin(16.235
to be continued, further
study was popular among postgraduates
as well, at a number
of 2.725, and that for part-time work ranked lower by a
amount of approximately 200 individuals. for Change the article
an
postgraduates
, unemployment and voluntary work accounted for 1.625 and 345, respectively, which were measured relatively a tenth as low as graduates
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