In many countries crime is increasing. What are the main reasons for this? What can be done to improve the situation? Support your position with relevant examples and include your own experience.

In many nations, the

crime

rate is going up

due to

many reasons,

such

as high unemployment, abuse of drugs and the rise in illegal foreigners, despite

this

measures can be taken to tackle

this

development,

for instance

providing employment prospects

especially

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for the youth, dealing with the

drug

use problem and tightening the

immigration

laws

. The rising unemployment

rates

in many

countries

has

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consequently

resulted in many people conducting

in

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criminal activities. As individuals fail to get

descent

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decent

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jobs they opt to find money to take care of their needs and wants through illegal ways

for example

by stealing, fraud and robberies. For illustration

countries

with high unemployment

rates

record high

crime

rates

annually. Illegal

immigration

,

furthermore

, results in higher

crime

rates

. A lot of foreigners enter

into

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neighbouring

countries

fleeing from being penalised

from

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their bad deeds in their mother

countries

and

as a

result

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they break

laws

in the country they migrate to.

Drug

abuse has

also

become a driver of

crime

. Many

drug

addicts end up engaging in crimes because they will be under the influence of toxic substances.

However

, there are solutions that can be employed to deal with the problem of increasing

crime

in many

countries

. The government can provide

unemploynment

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unemployment

benefits to everyone who doesn't have a job

inorder

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for them to access basic needs even though it motivates people to be lazy.

Also

, it can employ effective policies that can boost the economy and attract foreign

entreprenuars

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entrepreneurs

to invest in their country thereby increasing jobs.

Moreover

, tightening

of

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drug

trafficking

laws

and penalising anyone found in possession and influence of these toxic substances can reduce the

crime

rate. For illustration,

countries

that have strict

drug

laws

such

as Bangladesh and China

were

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anyone found in possession of drugs is put on

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death penalty or life in jail have recorded a fall in

crime

rates

.

Lastly

, tightening

of

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country

boarders

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borders

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can help reduce

immigration

. In conclusion, even though , the

crime

rate

keep

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growing in many nations because of illegal

immigration

and

drug

abuse , strict

measure

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measures

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such

as introducing tight

immigration

laws

and favourable economic policies can help deal with

such

a challenging development.