The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart given illustrates the proportion of world
illiteracy
by region
and by gender
for one
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year
period.
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one-year
Overall
, the highest number of world illiteracy
was dominated by female
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the female
gender
all around the world, and
followed by Correct word choice
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male
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the male
gender
where it was the lowest.
To begin
with, female
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gender
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illiteracy
rates
in several region
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regions
First,
South Asia
was the first ranked with 55 percent
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per cent
and
followed by Correct word choice
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Arab
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the Arab
second ranked
with approximately 52 Add a hyphen
second-ranked
percent
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per cent
number of
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illiteracy
rates
. After that, Sub-Sahara Africa was in
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third ranked
with about 48 Add a hyphen
third-ranked
percent
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per cent
Lastly
, several region
which are East Change to a plural noun
regions
Asia
, Latin
American
, and Develop Correct your spelling
America
Countries
were followed for the third
last
ranked where East Asian female gender
was only about 20 percent
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per cent
Latin
American with 13 percent
and the Change the spelling
per cent
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illiteracy
rates
.
On the other hand
, male
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the male
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in South Asia
become
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became
percent
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illiteracy
rates
. It followed
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Followed
Sub Saharan
Africa in the second with a little bit 30 Add a hyphen
Sub-Saharan
percent
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per cent
while
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third
with less than 30 percent
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per cent
Moreover
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region
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third
last
ranked which
are East Correct pronoun usage
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Asia
, Latin
America, and Developed Countries
where each got about 10 percent
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the
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Latin
American
, 8 Correct your spelling
America
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the
East Correct article usage
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Asia
, and the lowest was Developed Countries
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