The map below is if the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map of the

town

of Canterbury illustrates the possible locations to build the new school. Looking from an

overall

perspective, there are two possible locations where the new school building can stand: in the

town

centre or countryside. The first

location

(S1), which is in the countryside gives an opportunity to citizens of Sturry ,

which

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whose

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population is 7 thousand people, arrive to

S1

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at S1

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faster. The second benefit is that the users can be easily driven to

this

location

as it is in the suburb and there would be no traffic for both who come from the

town

center

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centre

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of

and

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apply

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Canterbury and the

town

of Sturry. The second

location

(S2), which stands in the city

center

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centre

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is much

convenient

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more convenient

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and faster to get there for urban users, as the school would be surrounded by

housing

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a housing

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area.

On the other hand

, there is a list of disadvantages

such

as the traffic because of its close

location

to

university

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the university

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and the far distance for towns that stay in the

neighborhood

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neighbourhood

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such

as Chartham(7

kilometers

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kilometres

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) and Sturry(5

kilometers

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kilometres

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).