question about increase in fatality rate despite advanced in medicine

There has been a tremendous increase in the number of individuals questioning the high fatality

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despite the current developed healthcare system. One of the main reasons for

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worrying trend is

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the fact that not enough funds are allocated to the

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to

develope

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develop

better vaccines.

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, there are

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readily available to tackle

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issue

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as the government planning educational workshops and supporting

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scientific

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, there is an argument to be made that the death

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of many preventable

diseases

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is still considerably high, despite the new innovations in medicine.

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, in 2019, more than 6.5 million

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died globally because of a

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virus called

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COVID-19

.

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reason, it is evident that the lack of enough

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and the absence of necessary expertise to control

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COVID-19

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impaired any possibility to manage the pandemic. What is more, herd immunity

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many countries is not well established, which refers to the protection of the entire community based on the number of vaccinated

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.

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being the case, it can be assumed that if serious actions were taken globally to support scientific

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, there would be no pandemic happening because of

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the COVID-19

virus. In order to resolve

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troubling issue, one viable solution would be for the government to establish stable financial resources to support

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and help scientists

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in their field.

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, in 1930, malaria was considered to be a fatal disease worldwide,

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, following the development of

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vaccine in 1980, a significant reduction

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both the cases and death

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were

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reported.

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, it is evident that funding the

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sector is a pivotal cornerstone in achieving

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healthcare system and

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fatality

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rate

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of these

diseases

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.

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, the local

aurthorities

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authorities

should ensure the administration of the vaccines to all the

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, because as mentioned before, it will improve the public immunity against the

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. With

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in mind, there is no doubt that if scientists had enough funding to conduct

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,

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would reduce considerably the negative consequences of the big gap in the healthcare system.

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, the overwhelming evidence seems to suggest that

people

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are still suffering from common preventable

diseases

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because of inappropriate support for the

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.

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, it is still possible to turn the tide by the government intervention to set new plans and manage these

diseases

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.