The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014.
The line graph illustrates the average
of
Change preposition
apply
prices
Fix the agreement mistake
price
changing
of Replace the word
changes
copper
, nickel, and zinc in 2014.
According to
what is presented in the graph, it is clear that
prices
is varying
every month. The Wrong verb form
vary
copper
were
hit a low Unnecessary verb
apply
to
-3 in June.
Change preposition
of
Whereas
copper
and nickel we’re started by decreasing prices
, zinc was increasing
from January to February. Wrong verb form
increased
Then
all of them were fluctuating up and down till June. then
they grew up and remained steady to
October. They slightly Change preposition
until
rising
from November.
Wrong verb form
rose
To conclude
, the prices
of copper
, nickel, and zinc are changing rapidly every month.Submitted by alhajeer11179 on
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Contractions: Don't use contractions.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words prices, copper with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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