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You recently completed a course and you borrowed a book from your teacher, which you couldn't return in time. You would like to return the book now. Write a lefter to your teacher and say What book was it How helpful was the book Explain why you couldn't return it in time.

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Dear Madam, I am Simi and I was your student in the economics course at Capitano University. I am writing
this
 letter, in regard to the
book
 of
your
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is with me which you gave me for solving practical questions and I want to
return
 it to you. The
book
 is related to economics and mainly covers whole the numeric problem from various chapters of the course
as well
as
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apply
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it
also
 provides sample answers which makes it easy to solve any problem. I want to say thank you to you because that
book
 helped me a lot to solve different numeric which were very difficult for me.
Besides
this
, I got an
Agrade
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A grade
 in economics because of
this
book
 and by your help. I really apologise, that I did not
return
 that
book
 on time you told me that you needed that
book
 for next semester but I was pregnant at that time and admitted to the hospital earlier and I did not get time to
return
 the
book
 to you. After I did visit the college many times to
return
 that
book
 but they told me that you were on vacation. Could you send me the address of your home so I can send the
book
 by parcel? I am really forward to hearing from you soon and Thanks for your cooperation. Yours Sincerely, Simi.
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