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The bar chart below gives information about the percentage of the population living in urban areas in different parts of the world. Summer use the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and male comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below gives information about the percentage of the population living in urban areas in different parts of the world. Summer use the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and male comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart
illustares
Correct your spelling
illustrates
 the proportion increase in average
property
prices
 in Algeria, China and Argentina from 2007 to 2010.
Overall
, the percentage growth in average
property
prices
 in China increased gradually over time
while
 it saw a noticeable drop in Algeria. The proportion increase in average
property
 values in Algeria was just above 6% in 2007 and
this
 declined gradually to just over 3% in 2009 before falling slightly to around 3% over a year. The percentage growth in average
property
prices
 in China was about 2% in the beginning and
this
 fraction doubled by 2008 before climbing modestly to over 6% over two years. In Argentina, the proportion increase in average
property
prices
 varied between just under 5% and just over 1% throughout the period.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words property, prices with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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