Some people think children should study at school and other think they should study at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Society argues that their

children

should taught through formal

education

,

whereas

others believe that they can study from home. I agree with those who think that it is better for

children

to

learning

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learn

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from

school

and

on

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in

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this

essay

i

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will explain with supporting opinions.

Education

can be learned from home,

however

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however,

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taking

children

to

enroll

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enrol

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at

school

could give several benefits. In their growing age,

children

are not only learn

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are not only learning

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about textbook knowledge but

also

social skills.

Therefore

,

study

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studying

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at

school

could help them to develop their social skills

such

as

build

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relationship

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relationships

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, communication and competition. To illustrate, by

study

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studying

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at

school

,

children

will encounter

with

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apply

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another students

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another student

other students

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and make a circle to build relationships.

Additionally

,

school

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schools

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also

have several competitions that may drive competitiveness. Formal

education

also

encourage

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encourages

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about

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discipline and time management, to be a good citizen in the future. At

school

,

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the student

a student

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student

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students

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should obey several rules and

coming

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come

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at

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school

on time, a

disobey

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disobedient

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attitude will get

any

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a

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punishment from

teacher

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the teacher

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.

This

attitude could help them if they

are graduated

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graduate

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from university and survive in

working

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the working

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environment.

For instance

,

school

requires

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require

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pupils to

use

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different

uniform

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uniforms

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everyday

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and come

at

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to

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school

on time,

this

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these

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rules

taught

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teach

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them that we should obey

if

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them if

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we want to survive in society. In conclusion,

education

is not only about

thing

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things

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that we learn from

book

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books

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but

also

another

softskill

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soft skill

soft-skill

about life. I,

therefore

, remain firmly convinced that

enroll

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enrolling

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in

school

could bring several advantages rather than

home schooling

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homeschooling

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.