The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given line graph portrays the average of CO2 emitted by individuals in the United Kingdom,
Sweden
, Italy and Portugal from 1967 to 2007.
Generally speaking, the United Kingdom was the country that produced the biggest amount of gases compared to the rest of the countries. Furthermore
, both the United Kingdom and Sweden
decreased their carbon emission during the provided time period, while
there was a rise of
emissions in Italy and Portugal.
In 1967, an English citizen produced above 10 Change preposition
in
tonnes
of gases on average. This
steadily plummeted , reaching around 8.5 tonnes
in 2007. Meanwhile, carbon emission
for individuals in Fix the agreement mistake
emissions
Sweden
were around 8.5 in 1967, reaching a peak at around 10.2 in 1977 and falling afterwards, getting an average below 6 tonnes
in 2007.
Italy started the period roughtly
at 4 Correct your spelling
roughly
tonnes
per person, while
Portugal was slightly at 1.5 tonnes
. Both countries presented a climb of carbons
emissions, making Italy surpass Change the noun form
carbon
Sweden
after 1987 and Portugal reach the same country in 2007. After 1997, both countries hovered around the same level, at an average of 7.8 and 5.7 for Italy and Portugal respectively.Submitted by tamaracheroki on
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