Study needs time, peace and comfort, whereas employment needs the same thing. Someone says it is impossible to combine those two because one distracts one another. Do you think this is realistic in our life today?
The
people
are talking about the way to result on money and get knowledge at the same moment. It is hard to achieve because three aspects must be present. Namely, moment, tranquility
, and relaxation. But, in my opinion, learning and working will do it together if you have good managerial.
I start with the great managerial and its impact on the result. Someone with a managerial in their life has more discipline to control their space to study in completing their self with the new skill. Change the spelling
tranquillity
While
, in their working hours, a worker pushes themselves to do the job as much as they can posible
. Correct your spelling
possible
possibly
Nevertheless
, They do not want the privacy and enjoyment of working and learning to be lost. For example
, the person works in a company from 8 am until 4 pm and learns new skills after that. The activity you did learn and work on should not other people
know because of your privacy, and you will enjoy doing that.
On the other side, people
with pure managerial have a problem conducting the occupation together. They choose one of them and do that until they finish and move to other work after that. This
is not a comprehensive manner. For instance
, a worker will resign from their job only to learn a new skill. Then
, they do not have the ability to consider their life priority.
In conclusion. learning something and doing a job will get space, privacy, and enjoyment professionally. In addition
. Good managerial are skills that people
have to get both learning and working togetherlly
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together
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