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The line chart below gives information about the percentage of female members of parliament in European countries (2000 – 2012)

The line chart below gives information about the percentage of female members of parliament in European countries (2000 – 2012)
#line #information #percentage #members #parliament #european #countries
The graph shows
the
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apply
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information about the
pecentage
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percentage
 of female members of parliament in several countries in Europe from 2000 to 2012. The countries that
show
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are shown
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 in
line
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the line
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 chart are
Germany
, Italy, France,
UK
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the UK
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 and
Belgium
.
Overall
, the
percentage
 of female members of
parliement
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parliament
 in
Germany
, Italy, France,
UK
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the UK
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, and
Belgium
 went up with various trends. the highest increase was
percentage
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the percentage
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 was
UK
 female
member
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members
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parliament
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in parliament
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 with up to 15%
increasement
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increase
. In the
begining
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beginning
, The highest
percentage
 of
female
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females
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percentage
 was
Germany
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in Germany
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 with over 30%
while
 Italy was the second place
in
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at
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 under 30%. yet the
percentage
 of
Germany
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German
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 female
member
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members
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 of
parliement
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parliament
 relatively stable.
In contrast
 with Italy, there
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was
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a
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an
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 abruptly rose in 2012 and made Italy the highest
percentage
 of female
parliement
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parliament
. There is no change
for
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in
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France
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France's
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 position, in 2000 the
percentage
is
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was
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 25%
then
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than
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 in 2012
slighly
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slightly
 over 30%. The
percentage
 of
UK
 and
Belgium
 female
parliement
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parliament
 started
in
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with
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the
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apply
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difference
percentage
, which
is
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apply
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Belgium
 is higher
that
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than
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UK
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the UK
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, but in 2012 both of them had
same
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the same
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 position.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words germany, uk, belgium, percentage, parliement with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 9 times.
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