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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram shows how Liverton docks change since 1980. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram shows how Liverton docks change since 1980. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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These two maps illustrate how Liverton docks, situated on the west to the coast and along the river, changed over 54
years
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54-year
 period from 1980 until today. There was considerable development of the settlement over these years and it was gradually transformed from warehouses for the sailed shipments to ship
museum
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museums
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 and other services for visitors. The most notable change is the bridge, which is located on the east of the voyage
museum
, that was constructed after the year 1980.
Although
 the ships stopped sailing to the coast, the ship
museum
 was built with hotels as a new building and parking
in
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opposite
to
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it.
Furthermore
, the cranes were removed from the two sides of the docks.
Also
, in 1980, there were three buildings which converted from warehouses
to
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into
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 two modern places
which
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are kid's playing area and an education centre,
where
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which
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 are located near the
museum
 currently. The third place is the apartments,
where
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which
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 are situated between the hotel and the parking.
Moreover
, the river walk was built along the river after the year 1980, which is
sited on
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located
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the
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south of the
voyage
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Voyage Museum
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museum
.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words museum with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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