The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise th einformation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The presented maps depict delineate the change in the facilities in

city

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hospital

Fix the agreement mistake

hospitals

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Change preposition

over a

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period of 3 years (200-2010)

Firstly

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, We analyse that clearly at first glance, the

road

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with the highest change is Hospital

Road

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On the other hand

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, The ring

road

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nearly remained stable.

Secondly

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, It is explicitly observed that in 2007 the car parking for staff and the public both were in the same place which was parallel to the hospital

road

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Nonetheless

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, In 2010 the parking was separated,

thus

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, the public was built on the eastern side of a

city

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hospital.

Likewise

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, In 2010, two roundabouts can clearly be seen

in contrast

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to 2007.

Furthermore

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, 6 bus stop points which were near the hospital

road

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moved and a new bus station established on the west side of the hospital

road

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after that it united 2 roundabouts with two paths. One of connected to the south of the ring

road

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and the other is connected to the

city

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road

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which is in the southeast.

Overall

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, Rises were in the south of

City

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Hospital

encountered

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and encountered

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various new facilities and it is these developments that made

this

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area far better.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words city, road with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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10
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

191 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

infrastructure
carriageway
roundabout
dual
interchange
pedestrian
footpath
commuter
facilities
accessibility
congestion
transit
urban planning
modernization
demolished
erected
adjacent
connectivity
redirected traffic
enhanced
displaced
underpass
bypass
renovate
capacity
upgrade
satellite view
aerial perspective
layout
zone
implemented changes
decongest
flow of traffic
vehicular movement

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The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise th einformation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Many people who care for the elderly do not have enough time to look after themselves.

In many countries, the number of animals and plants is declining. What are the causes and solutions? (250 words)

museums and ar galleries shuld concentrate on local works rather than showing the culture or artworks from other countries. Agree or disagree

Some people believe school children should be given multiple short vacations, while others believe they should get one long vacation. Give the advantages of both and express your own point of view.