The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise th einformation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The presented maps depict delineate the change in the facilities in
city
hospital
Fix the agreement mistake
hospitals
a
period of 3 years (200-2010)
Change preposition
over a
Firstly
, We analyse that clearly
at first glance, the road
with the highest change is Hospital Road
. On the other hand
, The ring road
nearly remained stable.
Secondly
, It is explicitly observed that in 2007 the car parking for staff and the public both were in the same place which was parallel to the hospital road
. Nonetheless
, In 2010 the parking was separated, thus
, the public was built on the eastern side of a city
hospital. Likewise
, In 2010, two roundabouts can clearly be seen in contrast
to 2007. Furthermore
, 6 bus stop points which were near the hospital road
moved and a new bus station established on the west side of the hospital road
after that it united 2 roundabouts with two paths. One of connected to the south of the ring road
and the other is connected to the city
road
which is in the southeast.
Overall
, Rises were in the south of City
Hospital encountered
various new facilities and it is these developments that made Correct word choice
and encountered
this
area far better.Submitted by ezgi.maide.213 on
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