The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise th einformation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise th einformation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The presented maps depict delineate the change in the facilities in
city
hospital
Fix the agreement mistake
hospitals
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a
Change preposition
over a
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period of 3 years (200-2010)
Firstly
, We analyse that clearly at first glance, the
road
with the highest change is Hospital
Road
.
On the other hand
, The ring
road
nearly remained stable.
Secondly
, It is explicitly observed that in 2007 the car parking for staff and the public both were in the same place which was parallel to the hospital
road
.
Nonetheless
, In 2010 the parking was separated,
thus
, the public was built on the eastern side of a
city
hospital.
Likewise
, In 2010, two roundabouts can clearly be seen
in contrast
to 2007.
Furthermore
, 6 bus stop points which were near the hospital
road
moved and a new bus station established on the west side of the hospital
road
after that it united 2 roundabouts with two paths. One of connected to the south of the ring
road
and the other is connected to the
city
road
which is in the southeast.
Overall
, Rises were in the south of
City
Hospital
encountered
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and encountered
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various new facilities and it is these developments that made
this
area far better.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words city, road with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • carriageway
  • roundabout
  • dual
  • interchange
  • pedestrian
  • footpath
  • commuter
  • facilities
  • accessibility
  • congestion
  • transit
  • urban planning
  • modernization
  • demolished
  • erected
  • adjacent
  • connectivity
  • redirected traffic
  • enhanced
  • displaced
  • underpass
  • bypass
  • renovate
  • capacity
  • upgrade
  • satellite view
  • aerial perspective
  • layout
  • zone
  • implemented changes
  • decongest
  • flow of traffic
  • vehicular movement
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