The given bar chart illustrates how many households owned and rented places in England and Wales during the period of 93 years.

The given bar chart illustrates how many households owned and rented places in England and Wales during the period of 93 years.
The bar charts present the comparison of
energy
use
from household and
gas
emissions
resulting from household appliances in Australia.
Overall
,
it is clear that
in the first chart, the most common
energy
used is for heating;
while
the least produced
energy
is from cooling households.
Whereas the
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second one illustrates the proportion of greenhouse
gas
emissions
which result from household usage.
To begin
with, heating is a more popular activity in Australia contributing to less than three-quarters collectively of the whole proportion.
This
process contributes to
gas
emissions
at 15% for heating and 32% for water heating. Cooling activity only makes up the smallest figure around 2% of
energy
use
, and
this
contributes to only 1% higher
gas
emissions
. Turning to the smallest contribution of
gas
emissions
emitted by households, heating only accounts for 15%, being the lowest number of the whole percentage.
On the other hand
, the
use
of other appliances which takes up 15% of
energy
use
, follows the number of
gas
emissions
emitted by them is the second largest, at 28%.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, use, gas, emissions with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • illustrates
  • households
  • owned
  • rented
  • trend
  • shift
  • steadily
  • increased
  • declined
  • majority
  • gradual
  • percentage
  • homeowners
  • renters
  • prominent
  • attributed
  • affordability
  • availability
  • mortgage loans
  • initiatives
  • government
  • housing preferences
  • financial situations
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