You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for launch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter say what the participants liked about the hotel explain why they were unhappy about the food suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in the future Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir or Madam
I would like to thank you for your support in hosting our meeting at your hotel
last
Saturday. Sunshine hotel
which Capitalize word
Hotel
located
in Add a missing verb
is located
district
1 was one of the best Capitalize word
District
choice
for arranging Change to a plural noun
choices
workshop
or meeting with Fix the agreement mistake
workshops
a
great service Correct article usage
apply
but
great finger food quality. Correct word choice
and
According to
our participants
Change to a genitive case
participant's
participants'
feedbacks
that was not exactly what they expected.
We liked the Fix the agreement mistake
feedback
cozy
meeting room and everything about the hotel, including its cleanliness, fresh air, large lounge with comfort sofa and high-speed internet service. Change the spelling
cosy
Although
the meeting was run all day long, your staffs
always be ready to support any trouble devices happened.
Fix the agreement mistake
staff
However
, the fingers
food that we were served Change the noun form
finger
that
was not good quality as some of our participants were not happy about it. The Correct pronoun usage
apply
skewers
meat was not cooked properly and it tasted chewy than our expectation. The fruits, especially Replace the word
skewered
strawberry
on top of Correct article usage
the strawberry
sponge
cake Correct article usage
the sponge
was
Correct subject-verb agreement
were
to
ripe and Correct your spelling
too
smell
rotten. I would like to ask you to Wrong verb form
smelled
double check
with your chef about food quality before serving them and you might Add a hyphen
double-check
to
prepare Change the verb form
apply
a small gifts
Correct the article-noun agreement
a small gift
small gifts
such
as package
of tea and cookies Add an article
a package
to
our Change preposition
for
participant
for the apologies to them.
I wish you a good day and hope Fix the agreement mistake
participants
you
that you will consider my suggestions.
Yours faithfully,
My BuiCorrect pronoun usage
apply
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