The bar chart shows the information of the number of volunteers and paid workers in 4 different roles in the sports sector of an Australian town in 2015.
The bar chart depicts the
number
of salaries and voluntary employees in Australian town events in 2015. The data reveals that volunteers have the most number
on the coaching, therapist, and other sections
except referees.
According to
the chart, the highest number
of contributors is in the coaching sector which stands at more than 70 people
. The second one is in the other sections
with nearly 60 people
, followed by the therapists sector with a bit more than 40 participants whereas
the referees part has the lowest contributors with below 40 people
.
In sharp contrast to this
, the wage earner people
have the most number
in other sections
with nearly 50 people
, followed by coaching with more than 40 people
but less than the other sections
. The next one is therapists
section with 41 Correct article usage
the therapists
people
and the least workers
are in referees with below 40 people
.
to sum up
, overall
, the voluntary workers
have more contributors than the paid workers
among all the sections
with the highest number
being more than 70 people
while
the paid workers
are only almost 50 number of
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apply
people
as the highest.Submitted by nurulfitriakamilah on
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