The bar chart below shows the hour per week that teenagers spend doing certain activities in Chester from 2002 to 2007
The bar chart depicts great detailed information about the amount of duration young people spend on several activities weekly in the city of Chester which is counted in hours. The data reveals that watching television is the most popular
whereas
bowling is the least preferred option among this
age group.
According to
the data, the time invested in entertainment such
as films and TV shows at the highest rate with almost 35 in 2007. Other leisure amusements highly chosen by adolescents are going to discos and shopping which is increasing each year.
On the other hand
, bowling does not have much interest from teens. As a result
, it is only spent below 5 from 2002 until 2007. It is also
followed by doing homework and sports which noticeably has the least portion. It has gone down gradually each year until now.
To sum up
, the youth in Chester favour investing their free time at home by enjoying the programs on TV and going out with friends to the pubs and shopping. Contrarily, bowling, doing homework and sports are less favourite with bowling became
the worst surveyed.Wrong verb form
becoming
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