The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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the vital role of

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should be to bolster the lives of human beings

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has grown in importance throughout the years.

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some individuals may agree, I strongly

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claim. It is my view that

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utilizing the amenities that the improvement of

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provides for people at all costs to enhance better circumstances for them to live in, can sabotage the

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and other species living in our globe.

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, the reproduction of animals in nutrition companies is one of the main reasons

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climate change.

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, all the plastic facilities that are being vastly manufactured every day, are going to be nonrecyclable litters that will harm the

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.

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, some people claim that if

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used for people’s better

life style

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, it won’t be useful for

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or

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improvement either.

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argument convincing as it is a two-way cycle. If people do not take

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and animals into consideration when using

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-based technologies, there will

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no opportunities for them to continue improving

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and there will be no healthy

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. To recapitulate,

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human lives is one of the most important goals of

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I completely disagree with the claim that it is the most important aim. Because

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taking care of our

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and other species around us are very serious factors that need to be applied when we want to use

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, So, there would be no harm

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implementing a balanced approach that combines aspects of both improving the people’s lives and taking care of the

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and other species’

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, there would be no obstacles to

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science

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as a source for increasing our

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