The maps below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps illustrate the blueprint of a sports centre in the college at present, and how it will be renewed in the future.
Overall
, it is clear that
there will be construction for the changing rooms, shops and cafe in the south of the map, and the outdoor courts will be demolished.
To begin
with, in the middle of the map, the swimming pool
, part of the changing rooms and reception are located in the same place, and the gym is going to be enlarged. Outdoor courts will be replaced by a leisure pool
on the left side of the pool
, and the changing room and sports shop will be constructed in the south of the leisure pool
.
In addition
, in the east, there is a new building which is a sports hall where are
other courts at the beginning, and a dance studio will be built on the right side of the hall. The cafe and another changing room will Correct pronoun usage
there are
also
be located on the right side of the reception.Submitted by af231186 on
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