The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by the UK residents in 1999. Summarize the information and make comparison. Write at least 150 words.
The line chart presents the total number of
people
who departed from and came to the UK
between 1979 and 1999, and the bar graph gives information about the top five countries (France, Spain, USA, Greece, and Turkey) to visit by UK
citizens in 1999.
Overall
, the total figure of people
who went abroad by UK
residents has more number rather than foreign tourists who came to the UK
for over 20 years. France was the most popular country
to visit by UK
citizens while
Turkey was the smallest to spend in 1999.
In 1979, approximately there were 12 million
UK
individuals left the country
while
only about 10 million
people
from outside the UK
came to the country
. After that, there was an increase in people
who went abroad up until 1985 at 20 million
and suddenly the figure rose dramatically, recorded at more than 50 million
people
visiting another country
in 1999. There was a similar pattern for foreigners to the UK
. Starting at 10 million
in 1979, it grew for the next 10 years to 20 million
before the trend expanded steadily until the end of the period at just before 30 million
.
On the other hand
, in 1999 UK
citizens chose France as their favorite
Change the spelling
favourite
country
to visit as the number stated around 11 million
people
for
visitors from the Change preposition
apply
UK
. In the second,
there were Spain at under 10 million
. For the other three countries, all numbers were below 5 million
tourists. Started from the USA at about 4 million
, and
followed by Greece and the smallest, Turkey at approximately 3.5 and 3 Correct word choice
apply
million
people
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words people, uk, country, million with synonyms.
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