The table below shows the age profilof tourist on backpacking holiday and the guided tours in New Zealand in 2005, and the pie chart gives the satisfaction rating of their stay. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and makecomparisons where relevant.
#age #profilof #tourist #holiday #tours #zealand #satisfaction #information #features #makecomparisons
The line graph depicts information about not show a huge difference
radio
and television users in the United Kingdom in three months, from October to December 1992. The data in the graph is shown by the percentage of inhabitants in the UK from 4 years old during TV
and Radio
utilization in day and night time
.
By and large, it is ubiquitous that the majority of people
in the UK preferred to watch TV
rather than listen to radio
during Correct article usage
the radio
the
period of Correct determiner usage
that
time
. Moreover
, the television audiences at the time
increased from afternoon to evening.
Turning to the data in the graph showing
that the Wrong verb form
shows
preference
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preferred
time
of
using Change preposition
for
TV
and radio
is fluctuated
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fluctuates
fluctuated
during
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over
the
Correct article usage
apply
time
. In the early morning, from 1 AM to 5 AM, people
chose
to watch Wrong verb form
choose
TV
calculating for a mere five percent
, even though itChange the spelling
per cent
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does
did
with
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from
radio
. Correct article usage
the radio
However
, from 7 AM to 13 PM, the percentage of people
listening to the radio
increased dramatically, beating (surpassing) the TV
percentage accounting for under a mere five percent
at 5 AM to 25 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
at 9 AM. Change the spelling
per cent
Nevertheless
, at 13 PM, the presentation of people
watching TV
started to rise from 15 percent
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per cent
then
continued to increase until it peaked approximately
45 Change preposition
at approximately
percent
at 21 PM showing the highest presentation during the period of Change the spelling
per cent
time
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Vocabulary: Replace the words radio, tv, time, people, percent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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