The two pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The two pie

chart

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provides

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an information

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information

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regarding

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of marital status in

Australia

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and Canada. Generally, the status of

marriage

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are

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classified into six classes in Canada and five in

Australia

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, 53% of the

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populations

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population

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in Canada are separated but not divorced

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only 1% of them are officially divorced.

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, the number of married

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are

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only 29%, showing

significant

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a significant

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populations

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population

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difference between long-lasting

marriage

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and separation.

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, the

populations

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of widows and never married people show the same percentages with just 7% and those two are followed by

populations

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same sex

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marriage

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with 3%.

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, In

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Australia

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Australia,

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many couples have preserved their

marriage

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as the married

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populations

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dominated with 46%.

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the

seperated

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separated

population is slightly

following

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followed

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by 41% of

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the populations

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populations

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population

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and only 2% are officially divorced.

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, there are no

same sex

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same-sex

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marriage

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marriages

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Australia

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. The

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of the widows and singles are showing similar numbers with 6% and 5%

repectively

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respectively

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words australia, marriage, populations with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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6
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
19
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

158 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

marital status
population
pie charts
percentage
categories
Married
Single
Divorced
Widowed
distribution
noticeable trends
comparison
significantly different
similarities
striking differences

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The two pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business, and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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In many countries, international tourism has become an important source of income. However, it also has negative effects. Do the benefits of international tourism outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.