The bar chart illustrates the percentage of how parents in a country spent time taking care of their children in the evening in 2022. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words
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The bar chart
show
information about the proportion of certain Change the verb form
shows
activity
that parents spent Fix the agreement mistake
activities
for
taking care of their Change preposition
apply
childern
in the evening, Correct your spelling
children
such
as dressing, homework
, playing games and preparing for bed in 2022.
Add a missing verb
doing homework
According to
the chat, father
became Correct article usage
the father
Correct article usage
the figures
figures
that spent less time in the evening with their Fix the agreement mistake
figure
childern
in the evening, yet Correct your spelling
children
mother
reached the highest Correct article usage
the mother
rate
comparing others group
based on dressing and homework Fix the agreement mistake
other groups
activity
even 2 others
Fix the agreement mistake
other activities
activity
had highest
Change the article
the highest
rate
when both parent
spent together.
The Change to a plural noun
parents
percetage
of Correct your spelling
percentage
father
Fix the agreement mistake
fathers
spent
time in the evening with their Correct pronoun usage
who spent
childer
dropped about under 10% in every Correct your spelling
children
activity
, wiith
Correct your spelling
with
highest
Correct article usage
the highest
rate
that father
spent was homework, Fix the agreement mistake
fathers
while
mother
reached 50% and Fix the agreement mistake
mothers
collaboration
of both Correct article usage
the collaboration
parent
Fix the agreement mistake
parents
slight
above 40%.
The Change the word
slightly
least
Correct your spelling
last
activity
that mother
spent with their Fix the agreement mistake
mothers
childern
was playing Correct your spelling
children
game
(under 30%), Fix the agreement mistake
games
in contrast
with both parent
spent together had 70% which is the highest Fix the agreement mistake
parents
rate
of spent time with family. Moreover
, in
dressing Change preposition
apply
activity
got reverse from that.Submitted by Qia on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words activity, rate with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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