The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The chart
illustrate
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the amount of households by their
anual
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annual
income
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in 2007,2011, and 2015.
Overall
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the highest salary in 2007
is
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$100,000 more and the lowest was $75,000 - $99,999. In 2011 the lower salary
is
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was
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the same but the highest
income
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is
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bewtween
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between
$25,000-$100,000.
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Moreover
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Moreover,
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in
2015
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2015,
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the
more
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apply
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salary was the same
in
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2005 but the least $75,000-$99,999.
On the other
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hand
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the
income
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of 50,000 - 74,999
of
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apply
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people
since
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between
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2007 and 2015 was the same . The conclusion
that
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is that
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income
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has raised the most in 2015 by 35%
millions
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million
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words income with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • household distribution
  • income brackets
  • annual income
  • percentage change
  • trend analysis
  • income group
  • significant increase/decrease
  • steady growth/decline
  • fluctuations
  • compared to
  • in contrast
  • notably
  • median income
  • poverty line
  • economic factors
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