The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The chart
illustrate
the amount of households by their Change the verb form
illustrates
anual
Correct your spelling
annual
income
in 2007,2011, and 2015.
Overall
the highest salary in 2007 is
$100,000 more and the lowest was $75,000 - $99,999. In 2011 the lower salary Wrong verb form
was
is
the same but the highest Wrong verb form
was
income
is
Wrong verb form
was
bewtween
$25,000-$100,000. Correct your spelling
between
Moreover
in Add a comma
Moreover,
2015
the Add a comma
2015,
more
salary was the same Correct quantifier usage
apply
in
2005 but the least $75,000-$99,999.
Change preposition
as in
On the other
hand
the Add a comma
hand,
income
of 50,000 - 74,999 of
people Change preposition
apply
since
2007 and 2015 was the same . The conclusion Change preposition
between
that
Add a missing verb
is that
income
has raised the most in 2015 by 35% millions
.Fix the agreement mistake
million
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words income with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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