The bar chart below shows the hour per week that teenagers spend doing certain activities in Chester from 2002 to 2007
The presented chart compares different types in terms of leisure time amongst teenagers in Chester during a period of 5
years
between 2002 to 2007.
Overall
, it is noticeable that over the years
children’s interest
Fix the agreement mistake
interests
had
changed. Wrong verb form
have
While
watching television was by far the most popular acitivity
between them, bowling was the least one. It is Correct your spelling
activity
cleas
that there is a great distance between watching television with others.
Regarding Correct your spelling
clear
to
the figures, going to pubs/discos has increased in 6 Remove the preposition
apply
years
but the most change was at
2007 which reached around 18 Change preposition
in
hours
from 8 in 2002. Likewise
, shopping had a rising trend from near
7 in 2002 to 15 in 2006 and Change the word
nearly
reamined
steady until 2007. Correct your spelling
remained
Moreover
, although
watching television had the highest rate among all interests with 25 hours
per week in 2002 and 2003, it grew to its peak at about 38 hours
in 2007.
On the other hand
, it is clear that
doing homework and sport witnessed a decrease from 13 to 7 and 10 to 2 respectively. Whereas
watching DVDs and playing bowling flactuated
during these Correct your spelling
fluctuated
fluctuate
years
, the rate of watching DVDs get
to its start point around 10 and Wrong verb form
got
bowing
was less Correct your spelling
bowling
that
5 Correct word choice
than
hours
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