The bar graph illustrates the change in the percentage of university graduates from several universities in different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006.

The bar graph illustrates the change in the percentage of university graduates from several universities in different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006.
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The presented chart compares
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of international graduated students from separate universities in some provinces of Canada in 2001 and 2006.
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, it is obvious that there was a great growth in the number of international students
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the mentioned cities.
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New Brunswick in both
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years accounted for the highest rate of graduation,Ontario had the least proportion.
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, Nova Scotia and British Columbia were at the same level. Regarding
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the figures in 2006, New Brunswick with around 12% dedicated
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the city with the most international graduated student,
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, only 7% of students in Ontario
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passed
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year which was the least
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among all the cities.
It is clear that
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the percentage of graduation in Nova Scotia and British in 2006 was
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at 11%. Looking at the given numbers in terms of 2001, there is a decreasing trend between the mentioned cities and as
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, New Brunswick had the highest rate and Ontario the
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lowest
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one at 7% and 3% respectively.
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