The map shows the public library 20 years ago and now. Compare and summarise the information in about 150 words.
The given two maps compare
between
the construction of a public Change preposition
apply
library
before
two decades Change preposition
apply
and
nowadays.
From an Rephrase
ago and
overall
perspective, it is noticeable that there are a
significant developments Correct article usage
apply
implement
in the Wrong verb form
implemented
library
.
On the one hand, in the past, particularly 20 years ago, there were only four rooms with a few facilities. In addition
, to be more specified
, on the north-east side of the Replace the word
specific
library
there was a Add a comma
library,
room
namely, children’s books. However
, in the middel
, there was a zone for adult non-fiction books. Correct your spelling
middle
Whereas
, on the south-east corner
, there was a space for a desk for questions and enquiries. Moreover
, in the center
of the Change the spelling
centre
library
, there was an area for tables and chairs. Furthermore
, on the north-west corner
, there was a room
for digital games and under this
there was a zone for adult fiction books. Add a comma
this,
Also
, on the south-west
Correct your spelling
southwest
corner
, there was a reading room
.
On the other hand
, nowadays, a
huge differences constructed Correct pronoun usage
there a
on
the Change preposition
in
library
such
as,
the children’s Remove the comma
apply
room
which was located in the north-east of it replaced by a lecture room
. Moreover
, the desk which was situated on the button side of the map replaced
by a new café. Add a missing verb
was replaced
In addition
, the children
Change noun form
children's
room
move
Wrong verb form
moved
into
the other side of the map, Change preposition
to
as well as
, the computer room
transformed to
the Change preposition
into
south-west
Correct your spelling
southwest
corner
of the library
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in addition, moreover".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words library, room, corner with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
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