The map shows the public library 20 years ago and now. Compare and summarise the information in about 150 words.

The map shows the public library 20 years ago and now. Compare and summarise the information in about 150 words.
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The given two maps compare
between
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the construction of a public
library
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before
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two decades
and
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ago and
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nowadays. From an
overall
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perspective, it is noticeable that there are
a
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significant developments
implement
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in the
library
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. On the one hand, in the past, particularly 20 years ago, there were only four rooms with a few facilities.
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, to be more
specified
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, on the north-east side of the
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library
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there was a
room
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namely, children’s books.
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, in the
middel
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middle
, there was a zone for adult non-fiction books.
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, on the south-east
corner
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, there was a space for a desk for questions and enquiries.
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, in the
center
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of the
library
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, there was an area for tables and chairs.
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, on the north-west
corner
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, there was a
room
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for digital games and under
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this
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there was a zone for adult fiction books.
Also
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, on the
south-west
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southwest
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corner
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, there was a reading
room
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.
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, nowadays,
a
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there a
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huge differences constructed
on
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in
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the
library
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such
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as
,
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the children’s
room
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which was located in the north-east of it replaced by a lecture
room
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.
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, the desk which was situated on the button side of the map
replaced
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by a new café.
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, the
children
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children's
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room
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move
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into
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the other side of the map,
as well as
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, the computer
room
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transformed
to
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into
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the
south-west
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southwest
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corner
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of the
library
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in addition, moreover".
Vocabulary: Replace the words library, room, corner with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • evolve
  • renovation
  • infrastructure
  • amenities
  • state-of-the-art
  • landscape
  • pedestrian
  • augment
  • spatial
  • demolish
  • construct
  • accessibility
  • innovations
  • extensions
  • facade
  • environmental-friendly
  • urban development
  • public facility
  • modernize
  • technology integration
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