The pie charts below show the sources for UK tax revenue for last year and the total UK government spending for last year.

The pie charts below show the sources for UK tax revenue for last year and the total UK government spending for last year.
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pie charts give information about the
percentage
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of
tax
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revenue and total
government
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spending in the UK for
last
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year.
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, it is obviously seen that
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the
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in the
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analyzed year the highest
percentage
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of
tax
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revenue of the UK was income
tax
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,
whereas
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the lowest
percentage
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made up
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at
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5% in business rates, fuel rates and council
tax
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.
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, the highest
figure
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in total
government
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spending was pensions, on the
centrally
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general
government
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and transport was the lowest
of
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figure
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. Getting back to the details in the UK income
tax
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accounted -
28
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for 28
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% ,
then
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the second highest
percentage
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was national insurance. The
figure
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made up- 21%
all
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of the
tax
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revenue,
by
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contrast
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the lowest
figure
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of
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business rates and council
tax
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constituted only 5%. The
remain
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remaining
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tax
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revenues were significantly more
,
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than 5%. It was others and
value added
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value-added
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tax
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11% and 17% respectively. With
regarded
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to total
government
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spending, the
figure
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of
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for
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pensions accounted
twenty
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for twenty
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percent
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per cent
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,
then
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next was health care. The
percentage
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was 14%
all
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of the total
government
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spending,
whereas
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the lowest 3% was general
government
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. The
percentage
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of other spending and defence was the same only 7%.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, tax, government, figure with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 6 times.
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