The pie charts below show the sources for UK tax revenue for last year and the total UK government spending for last year.

The pie

chart

represents the sources for

UK

tax

revenue for

last

year and the total

UK

government

spending for

last

year.

Overall

, we can see from the

chart

that there are

less

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fewer

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taxes than

spending

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the spending

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of the

UK

government

.

Firstly

, on the

tax

revenue

chart

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there

is

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are

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3 taxes that took each 5 per

cent

. They are council

tax

, business

tax

, and fuel duty.

While

on the

government

spending

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spending,

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there are two same percentages.

Last

year, the

UK

has

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spent 3

percent

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per cent

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of its revenue on general

government

and transport at 3

percent

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per cent

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each.

Secondly

, the biggest number on the first

chart

is

twenty eight

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twenty-eight

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per

cent

which is income

tax

,

whereas

on the second

chart

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it is pensions that took exactly twenty per

cent

.

Thirdly

, there is

value added

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value-added

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tax

with

its

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17%

is

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being

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the third biggest number,

similar

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a similar

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situation happened to welfare spending.

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point

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point,

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Others on the

tax

chart

is eleven per

cent

,

while

spending is only 7

per

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cent

.