The pie charts below show the sources for UK tax revenue for last year and the total UK government spending for last year.

The pie charts below show the sources for UK tax revenue for last year and the total UK government spending for last year.
The illustrated pie charts depict the sources of UK
tax
revenue for
last
year and the total UK government spending
last
year. Generally, the majority of both pie charts cover a few spheres,
such
as national insurance and income
tax
. First of all, the most incoming part of taxes are income taxes, which are higher to twenty-three per
cent
than the smallest one and take 28 per
cent
,
whereas
the difference between the highest and lowest index in government spending is only fifteen per
cent
with marks of twenty and three per
cent
for pensions and transport, respectively.
Moreover
, in the chart of
tax
revenues, there are three types of taxes: council
tax
, business rates, and fuel duty, which are equal, taking five per
cent
for each. In government spending, there are only two equal spheres: general govenment and transport, which take three per
cent
each.
Furthermore
, some parts in both charts are equal: indexes of value added
tax
and welfare show seventeen per
cent
for each.
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