The pie charts below show the sources for UK tax revenue for last year and the total UK government spending for last year.
The
provided
pie charts give information about the Verb problem
apply
percentage
of tax
revenue and total government
spending in the UK for last
year.
Overall
, it is obviously seen that Change preposition
in the
the
analyzed year the highest Change preposition
in the
percentage
of tax
revenue of the UK was income tax
, whereas
the lowest percentage
made up Change preposition
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at
5% in business rates, fuel rates and council Change preposition
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tax
. However
, the highest figure
in total government
spending was pensions, on the centrally
general Change the word
central
government
and transport was the lowest of
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figure
.
Getting back to the details in the UK income tax
accounted -28
% , Change preposition
for 28
then
the second highest percentage
was national insurance. The figure
made up- 21% all
of the Correct pronoun usage
apply
tax
revenue, by
contrast
the lowest Add the comma(s)
contrast,
figure
of
business rates and council Change preposition
for
tax
constituted only 5%. The remain
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remaining
tax
revenues were significantly more,
than 5%. It was others and Remove the comma
apply
value added
Add a hyphen
value-added
tax
11% and 17% respectively.
With regarded
to total Replace the word
regard
government
spending, the figure
of
pensions accounted Change preposition
for
twenty
Change preposition
for twenty
percent
, Change the spelling
per cent
then
next was health care. The percentage
was 14% all
of the total Correct pronoun usage
apply
government
spending, whereas
the lowest 3% was general government
. The percentage
of other spending and defence was the same only 7%.Submitted by dnm.best on
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