The two pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. (20 mins.)
The two pie charts indicate the proportion of Internet shopping sales for the four retail sectors, including electronic appliances,
home
furnishings, food and beverages and video games in Canada in 2005 and 2010.
Overall
, there has been a decreasing trend in video games and food and beverages sectors for five decades. While
electronic appliances and home
furnishing sectors have been an increasing trend in the same period.
To begin
with, the percentage of foodstuff and drinks significantly grew from 22% to 32% in 2005 and 2010. Similarly
, the percentage of video games gradually increased from 18% to 23% in the same period, but it was less than a 5% increase in the foodstuff and drinks sector.
In contrast
, the proportion of home
furnishing dramatically dropped from 25% to 15% in 2005 and 2010. Likely, the proportion of electronic devices currently decreased from 35% to 30% in the same period, but it was less than a 5% decrease in the home
furnishing sector.Submitted by jimmy.wong.wp on
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