More and more plastic waste is polluting cities, countrysides and oceans on the world. What problems does it cause? What are the solutions?
It is true that the amount of
plastic
, that make
pollution on land and water rise. There are a variety of possible. reasons for Correct subject-verb agreement
makes
this
, but steps can definitely be taken to tackle the problem.
Nowadays plastic
is one of the main problem
for ecology. Items wich are made from Change to a plural noun
problems
plastic
need a lot of time for decomposition and humanity are
not able to affect Correct subject-verb agreement
is
this
. Many wild creaturs
use Correct your spelling
creatures
plastic
, which lies in the soil, as food, this
cause
poisoning and risk of death. Extinction Correct subject-verb agreement
causes
create
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creates
of
any kind of animals Change preposition
apply
create
difficulties for Correct subject-verb agreement
creates
ecosystem
and Correct article usage
the ecosystem
break
the law of nature. Correct subject-verb agreement
breaks
For
example
several kinds of turtles in the USA die out because of pockets, Add a comma
example,
baloons
and bottles in the ocean.
Correct your spelling
balloons
Situation
with Add an article
The situation
plastic
can certainly be improved. Governments are able to motivate citizens to decrease plastic
usage by exploiting social video for public
. Correct article usage
the public
Also
, they can reduce using
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the use of
plastic
by helping manufacturers replace plastic
by
more decomposing material. Change preposition
with
For example
, usual bottles and pockets can be changed to glass bottles and paper pockets.
In conclusion, plastic
continue to pollute atmosphere
and ponds unless Correct article usage
the atmosphere
application
of Add an article
the application
plastic
decrease
.Correct subject-verb agreement
decreases
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