The problem of homelessness is on the rise in several significant urban centers globally. What is the main cause of this problem and what measures could be taken to sove it by communities and governments?

It is considered that many important cities are facing
homelessness
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the
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worldwide.
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essay will examine some main causes of
this
problem
and
also
some possible solutions. The main reasons
of
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rising
homelessness
in several significant urban
centers
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globally are inflation and bad migration policy. Nowadays inflation is one of the biggest
issue
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in our daily life.
Therefore
people can't cope
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with everything. They simply can't afford their daily needs let alone a home.
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recent survey in
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, it is shown that
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about 10%
people
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of people
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lives
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a tent
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tent
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tents
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. And
this
rate
are
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increasing every month. Another aforementioned dilemma is mismanagement in the immigration department.
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invited a lot of people from
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every corner of the world
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their
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.
Although
there
is
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no
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not
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enough
houses
than needs. For
instances
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, in Canada , a recent magazine called " The Economist
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published a shocking report. It showed
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a lot of international
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students
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couldn't find any
houses
in Toronto. Because
,
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there is
shortage
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a shortage
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of
houses
.
As a
result
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result,
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some
student
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students
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become homeless.
Thus
, the concern
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homeless numbers
are
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increasing in several giant urban cities.
Communities
and
government
can take some necessary steps to tackle
this
vital
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. And they are
,
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construction
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the construction
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of new
houses
and reduce taxes. By making new
houses
this
problem
can be solved.
Due to
the excessive population, giant cities
are
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often lack
of
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home
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homes
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.
Hence
if
government
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the government
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and
communities
are willing to build new
houses
, the number of
homelessness
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homeless people
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could easily be solved. To illustrate , in China ,in 2020 , completed a mega project called "No Homeless "
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able to solve their Internal
homelessness
problem
.
On the other
hand
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if
government
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the government
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and
communities
work together in terms of highntax in mega
city
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cities
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,
then
this
problem
ca
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can
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easily be solved if
government
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the government
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provides enough subsidiaries towards poor and rich
communities
charge less,
this
dilemma can be reduced.
This
way,
communities
and
government
will able to solve
this
problem
.
To conclude
,
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due to
the high inflation and bad migration policies play key
factor
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to
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in to
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rise
homelessness
problem
.
However
, by taking some useful measures,
communities
and
government
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the government
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will
able
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be able
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to
sove
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solve
save
this
.
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