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The problem of homelessness is on the rise in several significant urban centers globally. What is the main cause of this problem and what measures could be taken to sove it by communities and governments?

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It is considered that many important cities are facing
homelessness
issue
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in
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the
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worldwide.
This
 essay will examine some main causes of
this
problem
 and
also
 some possible solutions. The main reasons
of
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 rising
homelessness
 in several significant urban
centers
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centres
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 globally are inflation and bad migration policy. Nowadays inflation is one of the biggest
issue
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issues
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 in our daily life.
Therefore
 people can't cope
up
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with everything. They simply can't afford their daily needs let alone a home.
For example
,
according to
the
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 recent survey in
USA
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the USA
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, it is shown that
,
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 about 10%
people
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of people
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lives
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live
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 in the street with the help of
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a tent
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tent
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tents
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. And
this
 rate
are
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is
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 increasing every month. Another aforementioned dilemma is mismanagement in the immigration department.
Policymaker
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 invited a lot of people from
the
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every corner of the world
in
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to
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 their
mega city
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megacity
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.
Although
 there
is
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are
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no
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not
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 enough
houses
 than needs. For
instances
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, in Canada , a recent magazine called " The Economist
,
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 published a shocking report. It showed
,
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that
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a lot of international
student
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students
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 couldn't find any
houses
 in Toronto. Because
,
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there is
shortage
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a shortage
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 of
houses
.
As a
result
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result,
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 some
student
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students
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 become homeless.
Thus
, the concern
of
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 homeless numbers
are
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is
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 increasing in several giant urban cities.
Communities
 and
government
 can take some necessary steps to tackle
this
 vital
issues
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issue
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. And they are
,
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construction
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the construction
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 of new
houses
 and reduce taxes. By making new
houses
this
problem
 can be solved.
Due to
 the excessive population, giant cities
are
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often lack
of
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home
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homes
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.
Hence
 if
government
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the government
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 and
communities
 are willing to build new
houses
, the number of
homelessness
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homeless people
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 could easily be solved. To illustrate , in China ,in 2020 , completed a mega project called "No Homeless "
had
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 able to solve their Internal
homelessness
problem
.
On the other
hand
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 if
government
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the government
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 and
communities
 work together in terms of highntax in mega
city
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cities
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,
then
this
problem
ca
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can
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 easily be solved if
government
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the government
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 provides enough subsidiaries towards poor and rich
communities
 charge less,
this
 dilemma can be reduced.
This
 way,
communities
 and
government
 will able to solve
this
problem
.
To conclude
,
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due to
 the high inflation and bad migration policies play key
factor
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factors
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to
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in to
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 rise
homelessness
problem
.
However
, by taking some useful measures,
communities
 and
government
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the government
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 will
able
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be able
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 to
sove
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solve
save
this
.
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