In many countries import food from other contry of the world.what are the advantages and disadvantages of this kasur.
In the
world
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world,
countries
import and export food
from country
to another Correct pronoun usage
one country
country
. This
essay will include the advantages and disadvantages .
On one hand , the
access to a variety of foods will Correct article usage
apply
let
give access to a diverse range of products regardless of seasonal Verb problem
apply
locally
. But it's good to explore Change the word
local
food
from countries
it could be count
as tradition , culture , and exploration . Sometimes Change the verb form
be counted
people
with diseases need for essentials of food
lthat
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that
is
not in their Correct subject-verb agreement
are
country
. For example
people
with lactose not
everything Add the comma(s)
, not
Add a missing verb
is avalible
avalible
for them but their Correct your spelling
available
goverment
Correct your spelling
government
provide
them their nourishment . The variation of Correct subject-verb agreement
provides
food
could help alot
of Correct your spelling
a lot
people
in different ways . Therefore
the
importing types of Correct article usage
apply
food
play
a big role in Correct subject-verb agreement
plays
economy
which Correct article usage
the economy
nourish
the Correct subject-verb agreement
nourishes
countries
. Wherase
if Correct your spelling
Whereas
this
product is needed internationally it will boost the gdp
of the Correct your spelling
GDP
country
.
On the other hand
, the potential for lower safety standards plays a big rule
Correct your spelling
role
why
some Change preposition
in why
countries
produce their own food
and not
buy from abroad . Sometimes the Add a missing verb
do not
country
that we extract food
from have
bad safety regulations Correct subject-verb agreement
has
will
Correct pronoun usage
that will
cause
big Verb problem
have
affects
on the citizens . Replace the word
effects
Moreover
eating fruit that is
colored
and Change the spelling
coloured
it
was not checked when came to the Correct pronoun usage
apply
country
.This
problem will eventually play role
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a role
the role
on
the body it will cause many diseases like cancer , and mostly blood Change preposition
in
dieases
.
Correct your spelling
diseases
Finally
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Finally,
food
import
from outside should have Fix the agreement mistake
imports
a high tests
before entering any Correct the article-noun agreement
a high test
high tests
country
because this
is not joke
but these are Add an article
a joke
people
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