The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry.
The picture gives information about the steps and equipment involved in the process of making brick.
Overall
, the process has a number of different stages starting from digging clay and ending with products for consumers.
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To begin
with, the clay soil is dug up with an excavator . Linking Words
Next,
the clay will be filtered through a metal mesh to filter out the sand and Linking Words
then
the sand is passed through a roller. After that, they are mixed with water to pour into the mould. Linking Words
After
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this
stage is complete, they are dried in an oven for about 24-28 hours.
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Then
, they are fried from an average temperature of 200 to 980 degrees. By Linking Words
this
stage, heated again from 870 to 1300 degrees. After that cooled for 48 to 72 hours. Following that they are packaged. The final step has been completed they will be sent to the consumers.Linking Words
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