The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
The presented bar chart delineates the changes in the proportion of two various
accommodation
types namely,
households
owning and
households
renting in two states (England and Wales) a period of nearly nine decades ( 1918 to 2011).
Firstly
. We can analyse that clearly at first glance the highest rates between 1918 and 1971 are
Households
in rented .
On the other hand
,
households
in owned
accommodation
caught an upward tendency after 1971. It is explicitly observed that the changes in
households
in rented
accommodation
are not stable. The highest point of
this
option is in 1918 with roughly 75 individuals in every hundred.
Likewise
, it was
this
rate that made their position the highest rate in
this
graph.
Besides
, in
this
year, the lowest proportion of owned
accommodation
type with roughly 21 people in every hundred. In 1971 two types encountered at %50.
Therefore
, the owned type seems
to begin
to rise abruptly
in contrast
to the rented type's dramatic decrease. It can be clearly seen that In 2001 preserves the lowest percentage (31 individuals in every hundred) of rented
accommodation
and the highest percentage (69 people in every hundred) of own category
accommodation
.
Overall
, in The rented
accommodion
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accommodation
dominated areas before 1971 and after the following years (excluding 1971) owned category covered large proportions.
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  • ownership
  • tenancy
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • proportion
  • residence
  • dwelling
  • shift
  • transition
  • migration
  • fluctuate
  • stabilize
  • rise
  • fall
  • increase
  • decrease
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