The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
The presented bar chart delineates the changes in the proportion of two various
accommodation
types namely, households
owning and households
renting in two states (England and Wales) a period of nearly nine decades ( 1918 to 2011).
Firstly
. We can analyse that clearly at first glance the highest rates between 1918 and 1971 are Households
in rented . On the other hand
, households
in owned accommodation
caught an upward tendency after 1971.
It is explicitly observed that the changes in households
in rented accommodation
are not stable. The highest point of this
option is in 1918 with roughly 75 individuals in every hundred. Likewise
, it was this
rate that made their position the highest rate in this
graph. Besides
, in this
year, the lowest proportion of owned accommodation
type with roughly 21 people in every hundred. In 1971 two types encountered at %50. Therefore
, the owned type seems to begin
to rise abruptly in contrast
to the rented type's dramatic decrease. It can be clearly seen that In 2001 preserves the lowest percentage (31 individuals in every hundred) of rented accommodation
and the highest percentage (69 people in every hundred) of own category accommodation
.
Overall
, in The rented accommodion
dominated areas before 1971 and after the following years (excluding 1971) owned category covered large proportions.Correct your spelling
accommodation
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