The charts below present information about electricity generated using renewable and non-renewable energy in the United States in 2009 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pie charts showed information about electricity generated using renewable and non-renewable energy in two years 2009 and 2019 between France and Germany.

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electricity generation was highest in using renewable .

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Topic Vocabulary:

Electricity generation
Renewable energy
Non-renewable energy
Trends
Breakdown
Significant
Wind power
Solar power
Hydropower
Sustainable
Biomass
Fossil fuels
Nuclear energy
Percentage
Increase/decrease
Comparison
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Kilowatt-hours
Sustainability
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The charts below present information about electricity generated using renewable and non-renewable energy in the United States in 2009 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Some parents think giving children expensive gifts creating bad habits. do you agree or disagree

In many cities, planners tend to arrange shops, schools, offices, and homes in specific areas and separate them from each other. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, most countries can improve the standard of living through economic development, but so are lost as a result. Do you think the advantages of this phenomenon outweigh the disadvantages?

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task Write about the following topic: Fast food is now universally in most countries and is becoming increasingly popular. Some feel that this is a positive trend, while others do not. What are your opinions in this?

In recent days, a lot of people are spending a lot of money on celebrating personal family events, for example, New Year celebrations, birthdays, weddings and so on.