You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. A good friend has just changed schools and is having difficulty fitting in and needs your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • make suggestions as to how they could make friends • suggest joining clubs, participating in school activities • give any extra general advice
Dear,
I hope you are doing well at your new school. I got to know from your parents that you are facing some problems
to adjust
in school. I have Verb problem
apply
few
ideas to make friends and get involved in Correct article usage
a few
extra curriculum
activities.
As Correct your spelling
extracurricular
i
know, from our childhood you are an introvert. it is hard for you to make new friends, but try to start joining new clubs in which you will get a chance to Change the capitalization
I
intract
with more people of your liking. In your old school, you Correct your spelling
interact
took
Verb problem
apply
participate
in Wrong verb form
participated
poetry
competition. Add an article
a poetry
the poetry
i
suggest you Change the capitalization
I
to
find some similar activities in which you will improve Remove the particle
apply
you
skills and Change the pronoun
your
makes
you busy.
Verb problem
keep
i
would be glad if you start helping Change the capitalization
I
to
other students who Change preposition
apply
wants
to improve their poetry skills, as you are Change the verb form
want
expreinced
in Correct your spelling
experienced
this
field. This
approach will encourage you to spend more time with other pupils and you can become friends with them.
Hope to see you soon,
RyanSubmitted by simran.ghariall on
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greeting and closing
Ensure that you begin the letter with a proper greeting (e.g., Dear [Friend's Name],) and end with an appropriate closing (e.g., Best regards, [Your Name].
single idea per paragraph
Organize your letter into clear paragraphs, each containing one main idea, to enhance coherence.
complete response
Expand on each idea with more details and examples to fully develop your suggestions and advice.
logical structure
Use a range of cohesive devices and transition words to link paragraphs and sentences smoothly.
suitable writing tone
Maintain a consistent and appropriate tone throughout the letter to suit the context of writing to a friend.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite