Write about the following topic: Should humans adjust to technology or should technology be adjusted to us? Is technology making us intellectually weaker or more intelligent? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Technology

use

has

changing

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how people interact with it.

human

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Humans

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should master the

use

of

technology

so they will not be

dependant

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towards gadgets all the time in order to

consciusly

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consciously

handle it. In that way,

technology

improves the human intelligence. First of all, the development of

technology

is undeniable and inevitable because it is

the

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part of how modern improvement evolved. It is important for

human

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humans

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to know the basic skills of handling

gadget

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gadgets

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due to

its

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essential

use

.

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, dependently using

the

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technology

has challenged

population

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the population

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to be alienated

with

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real

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the real

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situation

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situations

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apart of it and it can be harmful to their survival condition.

For example

, teenagers

are having

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their own

handpone

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handphone

to connect with their friends but if they constantly

use

it without consciousness, they will forget their school assignments or escape their tasks just to be entertained.

However

, if young students

used

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their gadgets to improve more knowledge and learning sessions

then

they will inevitably become more intelligent

due to

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their

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awareness. They had to pass several technological challenges to accept the improvement of

electronical

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electronic

use

and they will

use

their understanding to innovate more achievements for the future.

For instance

, boys who

enjoyed

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programming for

computer

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computers

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will know how to make another application for their own

need

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or for public needs.

Thus

, understanding the

technology

lead

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them to be a better person. In conclusion, adjusting to the

technology

innovation benefits people to

use

it as it

become

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essential

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an essential

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part of society. As long as it

used

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is used

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as

the

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part of modern improvement and not for escaping

for

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basic needs,

technology

will not contribute

the

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to the

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dependant

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population for maximizing it.

In other words

, understanding

technology

with more awareness will be more beneficial for any generation

especially

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, especially

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for intellectual tools.