The bar and line chart below shows average monthly temperatures and bathing suit sales in New York for the first 6 months of 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar and line chart provides New York's average monthly

temperatures

and revenue of bathing

suits

during the first semester of 2012. Generally, The temperature rose gradually

while

the bathing

suits

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sales

fluctuated for the first six months. The average

temperatures

increased gradually, In January it started

with

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at

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30 degrees

fahrenheit

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and finished around 65 degrees

fahrenheit

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in June.

In addition

,

during

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from

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January to April, both of average

temperatures

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temperature

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rate and the bathing

suits

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suit

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sales

were showing

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similar

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a similar

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trend but for the

last

three

months

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months,

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the

sales

declined.

While the

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swimsuits started the year with

sales

amount of $100,000 in January and reached

its

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their

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peak in April with almost $275,000.

However

, as the weather

were

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getthing

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getting

hotter in May and June, the revenue dropped significantly to just $75,000 in May and $25,000 in June.

To conclude

, people tend to buy

the

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swimsuits before the summer

started

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starts

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and both figures show

negative

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a negative

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correlation between

temperatures

and

sales

of bathing

suits

.The bar and line chart below shows average monthly

temperatures

and bathing suit

sales

in New York for the first 6 months of 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.