The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart depicts some detailed information about the
number
of citizens, who are living in 4 Asian countries Philippines, Malaysia, Thailand and Indonesia over a period of 170 years
as well as
there is a prediction about the future plan of the population of these countries.
Overall
,
to begin
with , in the early period of the time in 1970,
Philippines
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the Philippines
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experienced the highest level of population,
while
in
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at
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the end of the period, it is predicted that, it will not see the greatest
number
of population.
moreover
, the
number
of Malaysian urbanized individuals increased gradually and it will reach the highest proportion in 2040 (from 30% to 90%).
Also
, the
number
of citizens in Thailand stayed steady
during
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about three decades (almost 25%) from 1990 to 2020 ,whilst it will witness a noticeable swell in 2040 (about 30 %).
To sum
up
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up,
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all four countries will experience
a
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dramatic progress in their citizens quantity in two later decades.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • graph
  • percentage
  • population
  • cities
  • Asian countries
  • 1970
  • 2020
  • predictions
  • 2030
  • 2040
  • estimations
  • urban
  • increasing
  • steadily
  • Japan
  • China
  • rise
  • urbanization
  • South Korea
  • India
  • upward trend
  • slow pace
  • surpass
  • resided
  • projected
  • moderate increase
  • significant surge
  • exceed
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