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The chart gives information on the percentage of women going into higher education in five countries for the years 1980 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart gives information on the percentage of women going into higher education in five countries for the years 1980 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart provides data about the
percentage
 of
women
 going into higher
education
 in the United Kingdom, the United States of America,
Australia
, South Korea and France in 1980 and 2015.
Overall
, in both 1980 and
2015
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2015,
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 the
percentage
 of
women
 going into higher
education
 in
Australia
 was the same. As can clearly be seen, in both 1980 and 2015 the
percentage
 of
women
 going into higher
education
 in
Australia
 was the same(a little less than 60 per
cent
). In 1980 in the UK the
percentage
 was roughly 35 per
cent
. In The United
States
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States,
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 the
percentage
 of females going into higher
education
 was approximately 39 per
cent
. In
France
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France,
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 by 1980 the
percentage
 was 50 per
cent
. The lowest
percentage
 of
women
 going into higher
education
 in 1980
had
Verb problem
was
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 South Korea(roughly 15 per
cent
.) In 2015 the
percentage
 of
women
 going into higher
education
 in the UK and France was the same(approximately 55 per
cent
). The
percentage
 of
women
 going into higher
education
 in the USA and
and
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Australia
 was
also
 the same. The rate was a little less than 60 per
cent
. The lowest
percentage
 of
women
 going into higher
education
 compared to other countries in 2015
had
Verb problem
was
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 South Korea. The rate was 30 per
cent
.
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