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Band 2

Write a reply to Daisy. In your email, you have to tell her that you really like the photos and the time you got together, describe a problem you had at the airport to her and suggest the time and place for the next trip.

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Dear Daisy, Hope you
are
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 reached home safely.
Last
 week I was busy with some sort of project in the office. So I couldn't put
pen
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a pen
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 on the paper. Thank you for sharing the photos
and
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apply
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I
have
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opened the folder yesterday night.
Such
 a wonderful time we spent together in Germany. I should appreciate your photographic skill, it was fabulous. When I was returning, I had a terrible experience
in
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at
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 the airport. The police arrested me and summoned
to
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me to
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 the senior officer. They
are
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claimed that I am a
supsect
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suspect
 of a murder case. After one hour
discussion
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of discussion
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 they understood that I
am
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was
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 not the one they
are
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were
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 searching for.
Finally
, I
could
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was
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 able to fly to my home town. As we discussed, we will go to
next
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the next
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 christman, I am suggesting to go Paris. My
collegue
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colleague
 John went to
paris
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Paris
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in
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apply
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last
 month and
he
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his
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experience
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experienced
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 was
awsosme
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awesome
awsome
. Let me know what you think. With warm regards Jennifer
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that your email has a clear introduction, body, and conclusion to structure your response effectively and enhance readability.
coherence cohesion
Develop your main ideas with supporting details to add depth to your response and make it more engaging for the reader.
task achievement
Carefully address all aspects of the task to achieve a well-rounded and complete response, ensuring that each point is relevant and expanded upon where necessary.
task achievement
Use specific, relevant examples to back up your points and provide real-world context that enriches your response.

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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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