The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The maps give us information about a current site and a planned layout of an industrial zone in Norbiton.
Overall
, the recent factories' area
will be pulled down and placed by a residential area
, equipped with some fresh amenities.
In the current situation, the whole industrial area
is located in the easterly part of the town and in the south part of the farmland, cut by a river crosses through it. To the south of the river is where the manufacturers' buildings are situated, circling around a roundabout which consists of two roads to its east and south.
In the future, there will be a major shift in the purpose and the property regarding the mentioned area
. The remaining industrial zone will be demolished and replaced by a housing territory. Several facilities including a playground, a school, stores, and a medical centre will be created to fulfil the community’s life. A road in the northwest of the roundabout and a bridge connecting to the incoming constructions upon the river are also
to be planned.Submitted by talithanakhwah19 on
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