The chart below shows the total number of minutes in billion of telephone calls in the UK divided three categories from 1995 from 2002.

The chart below shows the total number of minutes in billion of telephone calls in the UK divided three categories from 1995 from 2002.
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The bar graph illustrates the total number of minutes in billions of telephone calls in the UK from 1995 to 2002. The information is categorised into 3 groups: local fixed lines,national and international fixed lines, and mobiles.
Overall
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,the most evident conclusion is that the local fixed line recorded the highest number of minutes throughout the
period
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.
While
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mobiles are the lowest. At the beginning of the
period
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, the local fixed line was around 72 minutes (billion), and it rose to 90 in 1998 and 1999, respectively.
Nonetheless
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,
this
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figure decreased dramatically in 2002.
On the other hand
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, the national and international fixed lines experienced slight growth over the given
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. Mobiles showed an upward trend. In 1995,
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figure was below one-tenth.
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, it peaked
at the end
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of the
period
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at approximately 40.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Telecommunications
  • Long-distance calls
  • Local calls
  • International calls
  • Duration
  • Fluctuation
  • Incline/Decline
  • Significant
  • Trend
  • Statistical data
  • Billion
  • Minutes
  • Graph/chart interpretation
  • Incremental growth
  • Stabilize
  • Peak
  • Dip
  • Plummet
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