The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts illustrate information related to
the
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energy
usage
in diverse fields and their greenhouse
gas
radiation in an average Australian household.
According to
the given data, the most energy
consumption belongs to the heating field (42%), and after that
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that,
this
household uses the energy
to heat water a lot (30%). Other sectors, appliances, refrigeration, lighting, and cooling are in the high rank of energy
usage
respectively (15%, 7%, 4%, 2%).
On the other hand
, we are witnessing that the greenhouse
gas
emissions due to
heating is 15%. This
amount is less than the high consumption amount of it. The remaining energy
is consumed in other fields such
as water heating, other appliances, refrigeration, lighting, and cooling respectively (32%, 28%, 14%, 8%, 3%).
Overall
, the Australian household uses the most energy
to heat. However
, the greenhouse
gas
discharge due to
using it is less compared to the high consumption of it dramatically. Other fields produce more greenhouse
gas
whereas
the energy
usage
by them is less than the usage
energy
to heat.Submitted by MinaDadashi1376 on
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