The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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energy
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usage
in diverse fields and their Use synonyms
greenhouse
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radiation in an average Australian household.
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household uses the Linking Words
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to heat water a lot (30%). Other sectors, appliances, refrigeration, lighting, and cooling are in the high rank of Use synonyms
energy
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usage
respectively (15%, 7%, 4%, 2%).
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as water heating, other appliances, refrigeration, lighting, and cooling respectively (32%, 28%, 14%, 8%, 3%).
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using it is less compared to the high consumption of it dramatically. Other fields produce more Linking Words
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gas
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whereas
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usage
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energy
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "due to".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, usage, greenhouse, gas with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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