The chart below shows the number of films produced by five countries in three years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph above depicts the figure of movies produced by five different states from 2007 to 2009.
Generally, Country A created the highest amount of
films
in
every year, Change preposition
apply
whereas
country
C, D, and E Capitalize word
Country
stayed
in low number of under 20 Verb problem
had
films
. Each nation has their
own fluctuation of launched big screen shows in the 3-year period.
Correct pronoun usage
its
Firstly
, Region
A has
almost 90 Wrong verb form
had
films
made in both 2007 and 2008, before the number diminished to merely 80 by the year of
2009. Change preposition
apply
Secondly
, Region
B slightly elevated their production from 50 to just a little above 50 in 2008 until it rocketed its sum to 70 in the year after. Thirdly
, Region
C pictured a gradually increased total of film
from under 10 to almost 20 Fix the agreement mistake
films
films
in just 3 years. Fourthly, Region
D showed fluctuated
statistics from 2007 to 2009 in the range of below 10 to the middle of 10 and 20. Fifthly, Wrong verb form
fluctuating
Region
E experienced similar
trend Correct article usage
a similar
with
Change preposition
to
Region
C with noticeably lower figures in the same period.Submitted by jelitasofiaz on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words films, region with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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