Some children spend hours every day on smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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spending a huge amount of

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on their

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daily. One of the main reasons for

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the fact that

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are too busy to observe their

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’s activities.

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some may disagree, I firmly believe that by doing so, kids will risk their education and lose their future.

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and poor communication with their

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have increased the uncontrolled usage of

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smartphones

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by their

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.

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, many teachers in the UK have reported that two-thirds of students who have demonstrated deteriorating academic

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lack of continuous parental monitoring and almost total

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freedom

at their home.

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reason, it is evident that

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are responsible for the considerably increased abuse of

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, simply because

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had no

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to closely monitor their

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at home. What is more,

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tend to buy

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for their newborn

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just to distract them and keep them occupied, which inevitably has led to harvesting

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habit at an early

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, so it is harder to control it later.

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being the case, it can be assumed that if

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dedicated more

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, there would

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excessive use of

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, I firmly believe that

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is a dangerous

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that should be limited.

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,

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open the door to the internet which has various inappropriate content for

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, which can potentially harm them and mislead them at

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early age.

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could substantially affect their academic performance negatively, clearly because they have no experience in dealing with the dangerous content of the internet.

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,

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will lack the social skills in real life to deal with people and build social relationships,

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they will limit their exposure only to the virtual aspect of communication. With

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in mind, there is no doubt that if

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continues,

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possibly damage the future of the next generation.

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, the

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evidence seems to suggest that

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’ ignorance has contributed to the increased use of

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smartphones

by their

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. In my humble opinion, there should be

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immediate action by the

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to prevent any

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negative consequences from happening.