The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast food. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shows below.

The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast food. 

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shows below.
The first provided diagram illustrates pieces of information regarding expenditure on fast
foods
categorized by income groups,
while
the second chart depicts the consumption of fast
foods
from 1970 to 1990. Hamburgers, fish and chips, and pizza purchases were
classificated
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classified
into three major communities. Those communities are high-income, average-income, and low-income families.
On the other hand
, the trends of fast
foods
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food
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consumption were chronically
fluctuated
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. The figures
of
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for
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hamburgers and pizza bought
continously
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continuously
elevated. It was seen that wealthy and
middle class
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middle-class
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families
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families'
family's
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preference
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were focused on hamburgers, which aligned with the fact that the meal's consumption
were
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increased significantly to above 500 grams in 1990.
Besides
, poor residents cherish fish and chips more than other fast
foods
.
Nevertheless
, the number of sold fish and chips slightly diminished to 200 grams in 1985 before
continues
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to increase notably by 1990.
Moreover
, pizza is not decently interesting for the
overall
society.
However
, it still received a considerable
raise
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rise
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in the 20-year period until it reached its peak of almost 300 grams in 1990.
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