The graph bellow shows four categories of citrus fruits and top countries to which these were exported in thousand tones in 2012.

The graph bellow shows four categories of citrus fruits and top countries to which these were exported in thousand tones in 2012.
The depicted bar graphs indicate a breakdown of four types of citrus fruits
such
as orange, lemon, grapefruits and others and represent nations in which these fruits were exported in 2012. The data was measured in thousands of tones.
Overall
, it is apparently seen that the sales figures for
oranges
were by far the highest, and South Africa had the highest proportion of imported
oranges
.
Moreover
, Mexico was the leader in entering
lemons
and other varieties of citrus.
accordingly
, Turkey was dominant in terms of grapefruits. In detail, as it comes to
oranges
, South Africa was the top country in
this
regard, the figure was 1000, the data in Egypt halved and 400
oranges
were imported to the United States. The quantity of imported items
such
as
lemons
and others in Mexico was almost equal, 500.
Whereas
the US purchased 200
lemons
in 2012,
this
ratio for others was minimal.
Additionally
,
this
figure was closely followed by Egypt. Argentina bought around 100
lemons
in 2012. The figures for grapefruits have been altered between 200 in the US, 300 in Mexico to 400 in Turkey.
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