The maps show improvements that have been made to a university campus between 2010 and the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevan.
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The maps give information about the developments that have taken place on the University campus from 2010 to the present day.
Overall
, the campus site has been improved by the erection of some buildings along with
the replacement of an area and an additional road.
To begin
with, there was a student reconciliation and university offices on the left side of the main road in 2010. The former remains with a new accommodation building next to it, while
the latter has been demolished to make a way for Science building. To the east part of the University offices, there were Arts and Science teaching classes, but it has been knocked down and converted into an Arts building only.
In the 2010 map, the lake, lawn and seating area were located between the teaching block and student compromise. Yet, the lawn and seating area has been removed now, while
the student's flat has been replaced by scholar facilities such
as shops, offices, and others. The last
noticeable development is that the shops and the restaurant in 2010 have been demolished and the new scholar accommodation and a road to the south part of it have been built.Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
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